Writing



This year in term 1 and 2 we have been doing narratives and letter writing most Wednesdays i chose to go in Miss Bates class because I think I need some help with my writing.

I think that my writing isn’t great and that I need to improve on it but it is starting to improve. Also my spelling isn’t good I need to improve on it. My editing is improving. My planning is good but when I get into writing the story the plan isn’t used as much. The first time we went into our writing groups we wrote about an Australian animal and something that goes wrong in the story. My favourite story that I have written out of the Australian animal and the Andy Griffiths story. Has been the Australian Animal with Miss Bates.

Miss Bates helped a lot when I mucked up and when I needed help with spelling ideas. Also we used her lap top to find out facts about the animal to put into our story.

These are some of the letters and stores that I have done this term:

Formal letter:

Informal letter:



Portal story:



Andy Griffiths story: